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26-06-2010, 04:51 PM #1
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Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5
Tardy, as in late? I've nearly finished it! And I reckon you'll like it! It's Mr Tennant's idea of "aftercare"! Heh heh!
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27-06-2010, 02:00 AM #4
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Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5
I could almost hear Myras screams here in York!....xxxxx
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27-06-2010, 02:48 AM #5
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Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5
That evocative, eh? Glad you liked it, Sir. I've got loads of idea! M/f is my thing, but I've got a couple of scenareos in mind for the M/m and TV audience too...
This is proving to be a very popular series! I never expected it to take off like it has. I'm writing the next chapter as we speak, but I'll let this one sink in a bit first, like the 30 second interval between each stroke of the cane...*goes wibbly*
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27-06-2010, 10:52 PM #6
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Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5
Well written but not to my liking, due to too much non concensial violence. I still look forward to next part.
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27-06-2010, 11:21 PM #7
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Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5
I know it was a bit full on; the purpose of it was to vividly illustrate Mr. Birch's sadism. Every story needs a villain, and he is most definately it! It also converted Myra from a naughty girl that deserved to be punished, back into the heroine of the piece. The episode also strengthens the bond between her and Mr Tennant, which becomes very important later on.
You will love the next part!
Cherry x
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