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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    Quote Originally Posted by Chiefwhip View Post
    Glad to see you know panties can have more than one use.

    You realise your a tease - using short episodes, and making us wait for the next one?



    Look forward to more.
    Yes Sir, I do utilise the cliffhanger device to great effect! Part Four was quite long though, in my defence!

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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    Quote Originally Posted by anarchistic_masochist View Post
    Yes Sir, I do utilise the cliffhanger device to great effect! Part Four was quite long though, in my defence!
    As long as your not tardy with the next episode or story.

    Though I'm in a good mood, having just eaten my Dinner, of half a 9inch home made Lasagne

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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    Tardy, as in late? I've nearly finished it! And I reckon you'll like it! It's Mr Tennant's idea of "aftercare"! Heh heh!

    Cherry x

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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    I could almost hear Myras screams here in York!....xxxxx
    Gravity is my co-pilot

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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    Quote Originally Posted by kraker View Post
    I could almost hear Myras screams here in York!....xxxxx
    That evocative, eh? Glad you liked it, Sir. I've got loads of idea! M/f is my thing, but I've got a couple of scenareos in mind for the M/m and TV audience too...

    This is proving to be a very popular series! I never expected it to take off like it has. I'm writing the next chapter as we speak, but I'll let this one sink in a bit first, like the 30 second interval between each stroke of the cane...*goes wibbly*

    Cherry x

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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    Well written but not to my liking, due to too much non concensial violence. I still look forward to next part.

    Michael

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    Default Re: A Costly Miscalculation - Pt. 5

    Quote Originally Posted by Michaeloxon View Post
    Well written but not to my liking, due to too much non concensial violence. I still look forward to next part.

    Michael
    I know it was a bit full on; the purpose of it was to vividly illustrate Mr. Birch's sadism. Every story needs a villain, and he is most definately it! It also converted Myra from a naughty girl that deserved to be punished, back into the heroine of the piece. The episode also strengthens the bond between her and Mr Tennant, which becomes very important later on.

    You will love the next part!

    Cherry x

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